Describing a celebration

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My grandmother lives in a residence for the elderly, and here they celebrate the birthdays in a special way. 

Here they celebrate a special party called `Cumplemes´, and if you have some questions I´m going to explain what this celebration is about. They join all the birthdays that are in a month, there are a lot, and they celebrate all the birthdays of the month on only one day.

All the people say that this party is fantastic, but I only went one time and the party was so fantastic!

The day of the party was sunny. First there was music and you can dance on dance floor, here were lots of couples of elderly men and women dancing. You could also sing and even play different instruments.
Later on, everybody went to a large table and there they had lunch, the food was so delicious, especially the cake, which was made by one grandson of one old man, and he was such a good cook.
After all these things I was too tired to continue the day.